stuck in zero limits fish-eyed
asps curled in bracken shade
.
Shut up! I want to sleep – why do you talk?
reading up on antidotes
trust me, squirming, there is no better poison
.
thoughts fragment half-cut jewels
swirl creamily through furry layers and dark paillettes
dust binds dubious truthes
.
I think I want to get hitched
latent whims break loosed chains
in the shadows numbed and painless
.
trapezed on threads hung dumb on fern whorls
.
another ache a splinter borrowed
aspen afire in a rearview mirror
another sharpened point pulls awake
~

n.b. NaPoWriMo Day 5 prompt: take a poem and use the first letter of each line and the simple shape of the poem, including line breaks to write a new poem. Woody & Johnny took Race by Vasko Popa, translated by Charles Simic, published NYRB, (New York, 2019).
W&J 05/04/2021
Thank you for visiting and appreciating our poem. Johnny
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Chris!!!!!
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Ah ha! Liz!!!!!
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I was so excited after reading this that I misspelled your name — Brilliant Barbara. Sorry. Rock on Pernessy Poets!
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Colour me confused, but in awe. Not sure if I’m awake or asleep, but you caught me!
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Thank you, Angela! Glad you enjoyed it, awake or not! Johnny
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Thank you for writing about our Woody & Johnny post. All we took for our prompt on Day 5 was the first letter of each line and noted the shape of the poem. The poem was written by Woody & Johnny before the translation by Simic was read.
Really appreciate your thoughts on our tandem writing though! Thank you. Johnny (of Woody & Johnny).
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It is even more incredible having been produced in tandem. Will add the information to the post. Congrats again.
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Thank you Nina. We have reshaped our website as result of the confusion you identified, so sorry to have led you up the garden path and round the houses…we were concentrating on the writing…not the tech and were doubly surprised to have been picked out from NaPoWriMo Day FIve and then honoured by your essay. Thank you for that, that was lovely. W&J
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I second that, Johnny. Thanks Nina.
With love from Woody
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I don’t get it.
Is it about fishing?
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It’s about whatever you want it to be, you are the reader. Johnny
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